Talk:Sensationalist media

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Stepping on your toes a little..

Hi, I was meddling just a little bit here now, since I just happened to notice this nice addition but couldn't leave it alone, the 'pet peaves' of mine that I saw, contracted words (don't, isn't, aren't...) and the use of the word 'you'. Words should always be spelled out, and the reader should not be addressed directly by the writer.

I also rewrote a little bit where the language was somewhat 'bombastic'. An encyclopedic article should not state what the reader 'will' do, but should only offer neutral information. Anyway, apart from these quite minor issues, this article looks very good and very interesting indeed. I'm looking forward to seeing the coming additions to it. Keep up the good work. Optimist 14:20, 12 September 2008 (CDT)